ss7 writing exercise

1. 1.      Ms. L… accrued considerable debt to her family and others, during her struggle to provide for her children as a single parent.

---> While struggling as a single parent to provide for her children, Ms. L… accrued considerable debt to her family and others.

1. 2.      Chesapeake incorrectly asserts that it is not a proper defendant in this case, and, therefore, that relief cannot be granted.

---> Chesapeake incorrectly asserts that it is not a proper defendant in this case, and that therefore relief cannot be granted.

1. 3.      The court ruled that Office McGee’s primary role is not law enforcement because he was acting more as a school employee than as a police officer.
2. --> Finding that Officer McGee was acting more as a school employee than as a police officer in searching Robinson, the court ruled that an official's primary role is not law enforcement.